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        In As I Lay Dying, William Faulkner tells the story in a way that breaks the rules of the heroes journey. The book jumps between characters’ thoughts, scrambles the order of events, and often leaves out or twists important details. Because of this fragmented style, it’s hard to say the story fits the hero’s journey, which, as Wikipedia describes, is a common story pattern where one main hero goes on an adventure, faces challenges, and returns transformed. Adding to this unconventional approach, Faulkner famously wrote the entire novel “in six weeks without changing a word” (Faulkner 264). This quick and unpolished process suggests that Faulkner wasn’t concerned with carefully planning or revising the story to fit a traditional structure. Instead, he seemed more focused on capturing emotions and the messy, chaotic perspectives of his characters. With its unique style and quick writing process, As I Lay Dying doesn’t follow the traditional steps of the hero’s journey.

        The hero’s journey, as explained on Wikipedia, follows a clear structure where a hero embarks on an adventure, faces a crisis, and returns home changed. This type of story builds carefully, with each event logically following the last. In contrast, Faulkner’s style in As I Lay Dying is almost the complete opposite. The novel is filled with fragmented thoughts, constantly shifts between different characters, and presents events in a jumbled, out-of-order way. For instance, it jumps from surreal statements like “My mother is a fish” to detailed descriptions of a coffin or strange, philosophical reflections (Faulkner 84). These scattered and chaotic elements show that Faulkner wasn’t trying to follow the hero’s journey's traditional framework. Faulkner also centers the story on multiple characters rather than a single main hero, which makes it difficult to align with the hero’s journey framework showing he had no intention of this being a hero's journey to begin with

        Furthermore, Faulkner’s skepticism about traditional storytelling is reflected in Addie Bundren’s statement, “That was when I learned that words are no good; that words dont ever fit even what they are trying to say” (Faulkner, 172). This line reveals a distrust of language’s ability to fully capture the meaning of the fragmented and chaotic style of the novel itself. By including this perspective, Faulkner seems to acknowledge the limitations of storytelling and question whether his own work is meant to fit into any conventional narrative framework, such as the hero’s journey. Addie’s belief that words fail to express what they intend parallels with the novel’s disjointed structure, where events are jumbled, perspectives are scattered, and no single hero emerges. This reflects Faulkner’s broader rejection of clear, structured storytelling, reinforcing the idea that As I Lay Dying is intentionally messy and wasn’t intended to follow the path of the hero's journey. 

        In As I Lay Dying, William Faulkner breaks away from Joseph Campbell's hero's journey templates, making it hard to see the hero’s journey in the story. His fast writing process, the scattered and jumbled structure, and the focus on many characters instead of one central hero all go against the clear steps of the hero’s journey. Addie Bundren’s statement about words being useless shows that Faulkner may not have been trying to create a meaningful, structured story. Instead, the book is messy and chaotic on purpose, showing the complicated emotions and struggles that the characters face. Because of this, I don’t think As I Lay Dying follows the hero’s journey.

    

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  1. Hi Shriya, great analysis. You make a pretty strong case for why As I Lay Dying deviates from the hero’s journey structure, or at least the "traditional" one. I found your points about the novel's disjointed narrative reflecting the emotional chaos of the characters compelling. You have a point that Addie's quote about words being useless reflects that Faulkner isn't trying to be meaningful and it might connect to a broader critique of storytelling itself. Still, don't you think that certain scenes and actions in the story can be seen as steps in the Hero's Journey?

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  2. I think you have a very justifiable perspective about the disconnection between the book and the Hero's Journey. However, I feel like a few of the sections do actually represent the Monomyth regardless, and some of the characters may partially represent a step or two as a whole. Since the Hero's Journey is meant to be a flexible framework, the ultimate question is "how much leeway is in the Hero's Journey?"

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  3. This was a really great analysis! I agree that As I Lay Dying doesn't follow the traditional steps of a hero's journey. However, I would say that Faulkner intentionally took this unique approach, trying to make a mockery of the concept of a hero's journey. I think that he follows it in various ways, even if it's hard to follow at times. You're totally right that the book is chaotic on purpose in order to reflect the complexity of human emotions and grief. How different do you think the book would be had Faulkner used the traditional hero's journey steps?

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  4. Hey Shriya, this was really good! Faulkner definitely makes a lot of deviations from the traditional hero's journey, the fractured narrative being used to describe the emotional chaos in the family was a very interesting approach for him to take. Faulkner has a lot of meta moments in the novel, and is definitely trying to create something unique that differentiates from the normal boxes of literature (very modernist of him). Great work!

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